Do you like it when she cries, say fuck that! (Fuck that!!!)
Burning desire within those eyes
Bleed her out until she dies
You took her life, without remorse
You broke her down and put out her torch
Beautiful girl with a glowing light
All extinguished in the fire of those fucking eyes!
Do you like it when she's broken, say fuck that! (Fuck that!!!)
She gave you her soul and you crushed it
Put it to the floor and stepped all over it
Took everything she had, gave nothing back
She loved you the same after every fucking attack
Her tears just fuelled those burning eyes
They'll burn until the day they die
Do you like it when she bleeds, say fuck that! (Fuck that!!!)
The fire pushes as you to throw your hands
A sickening "thud" every time they land
Her perfect skin blemished, you don't give a shit
You just bash and yell and scream and kick
You make me sick, you deserve to die
She stay's with you, everyone wonders why
Do you like it when she dies, say fuck that! (Fuck that!!!)
All your hate and all your drive
Put out the glowing love inside
You beat her down, you broke her soul
You made her forget her life, her love, her goals
Your next motherfucker, I'll put you in the ground
Its only too bad I'm too late to turn her around
Do you like what you see, say fuck that! (Fuck that!!!)
The fire in these eyes is hotter then yours
The force behind these hands is more then yours
The love you stole from me is dead and gone
Only hatred for you while I beat and stomp and pound
She left me for you, you destroyed her life
I won't stop till you know her pain from every fucking night!!!
Do you like it when she cries, say fuck that! (Fuck that!!!)
Do you like it when she's broken, say fuck that! (Fuck that!!!)
Do you like it when she bleeds, say fuck that! (Fuck that!!!)
Do you like it when she dies, say fuck that! (Fuck that!!!)
Do you like what you see, say fuck that! (Fuck that!!!)
DO YOU LIKE SEEING ME, DO YOU LIKE SEEING ME! (Fuck that (x3)!!!)
Author notes
A girl leaves her man for someone who she finds more attractive. Pretty boy has a mean fire inside, it comes out and after a short while he puts out the beautiful glow from the girl who left a good man to be with him.
The good man never to this day got over her, and he paid back every single blow, every tear, every blooddrop...every last bit of pain.
We'll be putting music to this within the next few weeks, thanks for reading
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Maybe you could hook me up with a copy of this song once you lay down the track. I really love the lyrics, expresses anger and violence while keeping everything in a good, metaphoric flow.
Too many angry songs like this are simplistic in their writing, not very thought out. However, you proved that songs with emotion as strong as this cannot just be a primitive cry, but one's heart simply written out onto paper.
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This is very depressing, but I like it a lot. It is so true, many people find it hard to leave people even though they hurt them over and over again. Sometimes you just get so involved, that you feel you can't get it. Good write. I would love to hear this song.
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This sounds like a song I've heard, but it was good nonetheless. I love the repetition in the lyrics and how you didn't over do it. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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Good write
I can understand the sentiment. No death involved, but I did get some evens. Just a bit too much fuckin' for an old guy Never thought I'd say that -
This is a very strong, touching piece. Filled with such rage and heartwrenching affects. Great write.
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Very moving, frightfully deep with emotions, very well written shocked me keep it up you rock!
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I love this. Very angry, sounds like something I would Listen to.
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a very interesting write that you have here. Sounds like a very angry write to me. Anytime you tell someone to do this... F.... then I am sure you are upset. Hope things get better soon.
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I love it++++
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