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One morsel

A terrible spectacle
It happens every night
She watches from the window
In the dirty alleyway
A sickly pup and its torturer
Taunting and luring the dog in
Close
One morsel of nourishment
Before he kicks it
Laughing
Already bruised and broken ribs
Yelping
It limps away
To repeat this again
That one scrap
Always worth it to the poor pup
Enough to return again
She turns her back
Crying

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