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Meditation

Night
stillness
darkest calm
private, quiet
deepest reflection
liberate profoundness
reconcile disparate parts
freedom’s own elucidation
silent arms enfolding forgiveness
ephemeral thoughts, ethereal truths.

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Etheree --

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  • Ithica silver member
    March 17

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    This is like a spill of quiet soothing... and I forget sometimes about all these fun forms that I hastily abandoned to free verse... Great topic too...


  • Broken-Rickie
    March 17
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    This is amazing. So peaceful and calming. I like the form as well...


  • Rushkins
    March 11

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    i love this poem, and i love that my words helped you write it, i feel like i really helped oyu out cause this poem is amazing, its short but it got power to it, you keep writing as well, very good


  • Nymphetemine
    March 10

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    Dear poet, again I havent a clue what an Etheree is....lol.. Love the poem.. "Quiet deepest reflection liberate profoundness" I like...
    Your knowledge of writing is profound..
    Love and Light AngelofLight xx