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spring gust ...
the cat's tail points
to the clouds


a second version I'm considering is:


spring gust ...
the cat's tail points
to the moon


.... which is now my favorite of the two.

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LOL... this is based on my three cats who all seem to have their tails straight in the air.

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  • Linrose
    April 6
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    I also like the second one best...I had two visuals with this: the cat is "mooning" the moon , and the second one is a real segue...Johnny Gleason, with arm raised and index finger pointing, shouting at his wife, "To the moon, Gladys, to the moon!" lol ...think your cats might be sending the same message? just kidding!


    • haikumonk gold member
      April 6
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      LOLL... I loved that show!!! I laughed everytime he said it too... And yes... I do think my cat sends me messages... in particular when the tail is UP! LOLLLL

      • Linrose
        April 7
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        LOL...well you know how uppity the feline species is . BTW, I realized that I got the name wrong...it's Jackie, not Johnny Gleason...the old brain cells are just not what they used to be...lol


        Linda

  • ooh I really like the second one, mainly because I have a strange obsession with the moon. Haha, both are great though, like always


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    March 10

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    aw...I love them both..




  • Mari Goes gold member
    March 10

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    The second one is my favourite too. I wonder why is the cat's tail pointing up...hm, naughty cat...?


    • haikumonk gold member
      March 10
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      Hi Mari... thanks so much. LOL... silly cats. Their tales are always in the air... like antennas. hahaa


  • Peteskid gold member
    March 9

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    spring haiku class-
    a beginner sees how far
    to the clouds

    ...PK


    • haikumonk gold member
      March 10
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      Hey Peteskid... Great response... thanks for the laugh. I needed it quite frankly.

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