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Christmas

Everybody's bustling
All around town
It's such a happy time
And you never see a frown

Everybody's going out
Looking for a tree
All the gifts to be bought
Are just another fee

Then finally Christmas Morning
Comes to my home
The only thing I want this year
Is just a box of foam!

Author notes

The topic was given to me by my little sister.

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  • twilightluvr4ever
    March 17
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    I don't really know about the foam. It was just something to rhyme with home.


  • crackerjackie
    March 17

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    A box of foam? Why foam? What kind of foam? I would make the font a little lighter on this page if I were you...it's kind of hard to read...but other than that it was good.