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Kan doo

"Who's been sleeping in my bed>"
Asked the solitary man
"It's only a single matress
At least that was the plan."

"I wish I had a NIce girl
To sleep with me
Or maybe a little kangaroo
Whay-hay-hay-heeeee!"

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  • daviscth silver member
    March 11
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  • daviscth silver member
    March 9

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    LOL The humor in this had me chuckling out loud!!!! Thank you for this bit of imagery. I needed the laugh tonight.