I heard you said that you'd be okay
But you didn't even listen to yourself.
Now I'm left here feeling this way
And I don't even got the time for anybody else.
I just sit here staring at my covered walls
Assuming my inequities
I wait for you but really you wait for me.
On the other side you look for me.
And you smile, at what you see.
A contest entry
- PUT YOUR LIGHTS ON! by LadyLavender.
725 points, ended March 11, 6 entries
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Ache for More
This sounds like a song. I can here a melody in my head. I like this, introspective, i just wish you could have expanded just a tad bit on this; I feel, better yet i ache for more. Smile.
Good luck and thank you for entering.
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