"JUST 4 ME & MINE WITH ME IN MIND"
I grew up in hammy down clothes,
Where Negative was Negative
no matter which one u chose!
Everyone wanted Bling Bling
& our fav. rapper said
" He had Hoes! "
☆☆☆Atlanta☆☆☆
Crack is the epidemic,
CrackHead should, "Just 4get it."
No Hope For a Loss Cause!
Str8* Orders from tha Boss..
☆Georgia Rule☆
Say to them,
say to the down-keepers,
the sun-slappers,
the self-soilers,
the harmony-hushers,
"Even if you are not ready for day
it cannot always be night."
You will be right.
For that is the hard home-run.
Live not for battles won.
Live not for the-end-of-the-song.
Live in the along.
Becuase just like "Snap"
that moment is gone!
*Just keep ya comment real *
Comments
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I like it!!!
Very interesting...its true "Because just like "SNAP" that moment is gone!" I like your poetry style...keep it true...=D

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way to flow bro...
you've captured your own style in a watered down world of stagnant originality. Big ups for the efforts...they've been not in vain, but rather appreciated.

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Like your positive confession....It truly is like a positive rap poem...and your generation need to hear it, and we all need to hear it...Yeah, for the positive....It is catching!


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I like your flow in this a lot! Keep pennin and keep lookin for that positive anyways!


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Wow!!! At first I was wondering about it, but then as it went along it became amazing and great!!! What a read!


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