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Supergirl

In your futile attempt to explicate my state of mind,

I strongly urge you to explore each and every aspect.

The delusion you allege will be truly hard to define

so before you exploit it you best remember respect.

 

You think you should allocate blame that should explain,

what you see as a girl broken, weak and fragile.

I beg that you not waste your precious time in vain,

for to understand the strength of me, it would take a while.

 

 

Let me be more explicit, so this discourse we can expedite.

Your love was good and it I did enjoy and appreciate.

You really did believe that you were truly my kryptonite

Not to be facetious, but from that concept you need to deviate.

 

 

I understand how to you it would be logical, it just makes me smile.

Stop believing that you were the entity that eclipsed my world.

You were indeed delicious, but keep this little note on file,

Remember, I'm the one who put super in "Supergirl!"

 

 

Marjorie Joyce Leslie

03/09/09

 

 

Author notes

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the words i used, more than ten are:
futile
explicate
explore aspect allege exploit respect
allocate fragile precious explicit expedite
appreciate facetious logical eclipsed
delicious super
they are also underlined in the poem

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  • penman gold member
    July 18

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    Excellent

    Wow, that is some list of words. And you used them so skillfully. Always so masterful in everything you write. Thank you for sharing

  • Some do think they can figure you out, don't they? Well, your piece makes it clear that the attempt is futile.

    Enjoyed your write.


  • Beret55 silver member
    March 26
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    haha that was sharp. Vrey well writen.


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    March 16
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    This was a strong poem. It shows that you wont let someone keep you down. The way you put this together pulls the reader in. Thanks for reading one of my poems that means a lot to me sorry it took so long to get back to you been really busy, again I really enjoyed this lots of love SH


  • Denerica
    March 11

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    Yes we all have to see we are super women, with virtue, vitality and strength. Well written. Blessings.


  • cgirl0410 silver member
    March 10

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    Excellent word usuage. Great flow with this contest piece. I really enjoyed this, especially the ending. Great write. - cgirl0410


  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    March 10

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    You ARE a "supergirl," if there ever was one! Wow! You really never cease to amaze me at the depth of the remarkable poetry you conjure from such awesome words. Too bad we can't make your "word contest" entries required reading for the under 20 crowd on this site! This one left me feeling that I was on a roller-coaster, and left me just as breathless. As always, with this type of work, you definitely give out with the attitude, and it makes a powerful statement. Wow, girl! What else can I say? WOW!


  • Anu-Nataraj
    March 10

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    hehehehehe
    loved the last para !!!!
    good luck !!
    great work with the words !!
    take care abd good luck in the contest friend !!
    ~Anagha


  • Samplette gold member
    March 9

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    I loved this!! You gave this piece "attitude" for sure. Very well crafted. I wish you the best in the contest.
    Sam


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    March 9

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    excellent~

    You go sis....
    Too much work for me here LOL
    Best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

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