She was dressed to show the angels there's a paradise on Earth
In a jacket sweetly tailored to betray her absent girth
She had breasts that made onlookers lose their miseries in smiles
And her skirt was nicely crafted for her legs that ran for miles
Subtle make-up only added to a face beyond a dream
And her hair a crowning glory that had trapped the sunset's gleam
She was far beyond perfection almost all you could desire
At a glance you would have gambled she could set the world on fire
Yet she had an imperfection that diluted her appeals
Such a goddess looked so awkward falling off her four inch heels!!!
Please tell me honestly what you think, good or bad.
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Superb
Made me smile and in the end laugh, thanks and keep it up. Cheers Rod.
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lol, it can happen to the best of us.
Last week I fell on the dance floor with a whip in my hand. Yeah not sure what happened there, I don't even remember. Guess I was asked it a was a stripper and I rolled on the floor in fits of giggles.
This is just what this poem brought back in my mind. It was a wonderful visual that made me smile.
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Ruptured Duck definately...
brought a smile-
Bumps x
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Oops! She should have practiced walking more!!!!!! Those 4 inchers are murderous!
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Boffo!
What a cruel thing to do to that poor woman.
If she shows up in any poem of mine I will treat her much better.
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You'll know her at once if you see her
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Hey who cares about her little imperfection I'm in love can you fix me up with a date?
Wonderful
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Stop by your nearest A&E department, she is the girl at the end waiting for X-rays on her ankle
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indeed I agree with the lady below, been there done that.
Tory
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As a woman ... been there, done that, got the broken heels to prove it and nothing looks worse than a woman who can't walk on stiletto heels .. a ruptured duck springs to mind here
A good verse worth three clapping ducks
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