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The Never Ending Screaming

I run for my life
Trying to survive
Survive in this hell i call home
I hide under my bed

Waiting for him to skip my shed
He opened the door
Five of them pour in wanting more
They grab my legs
And pull me out

I scream and thrash
Trying to get away while i can
They each take their turn
Taking their turn making me scream
I cry and cry

Always wanting to die
I lay on the floor
Bleeding and sore
He comes in with the same men
Begging for more

I scream and cry
Begging him that i can't go on
He grabbed my face and slamed me into the bed
He punched and slaped me saying "Your mine!"
Once they finshed i cryed some more

Thinking that i must be a whore
I crawl under my bed
And i lay there hearing the blood curdling screams
The screams that will haunt my dreams

I beg them to stop
To leave me alone
I beg god to make it go away
And to never come again another day

I stand up and grab my blade
I place it against my wrist
I feel the slice and i keep going
Then i shove the blade deep into my chest
And i scream with my final breath

Author notes

R a y n e 1 3 3 1

Don't die live life

w/e i'm good for anything

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  • NickRhyme silver member
    May 24
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    Very sad and very powerful. Nice work.


  • Antebellum
    May 7
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    ae so sad.
    I really hope this isnt true.


  • AshleyAesthetic
    May 3

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    Whoa dark!
    So so very sad. Oh my god. I hope this isnt a real story.
    Thank you so much for your entry

  • Born
    April 27
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    That was every sad and dark. l saw the image in my imagination as l read. thanks for sharing.


  • AngelsKissesJenna
    April 13

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    Dark
    yet VERY VERY relatable for me. I almost cried reading this one...........No wait I did I still am crying. I can really relate to this even tho it was just one person I still feel as if it was more then one. The part that I thought "OMG I'm able to relate to it"

    " I stand up and grab my blade
    I place it against my wrist
    I feel the slice and i keep going
    Then i shove the blade deep into my chest
    And i scream with my final breath"

    Thanks for entering and good luck


  • tears.of.silence
    April 13

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    I missed this poem. I'm very sorry about that. You have done with this. You've made a 16 for this poem giving you 87 points. great work. thanks for entering the contest and best of luck to you. kahy


  • SubKitten
    April 8

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    A very haunting and dark piece. It's a little lacking in imagery, but you make up for it with the chilling emotion that one can't help but pick up on from the very first line. I think this would be an interesting piece to expand on with more description (if you have the stomach for such a thing).

  • KaylynKhaotic
    April 8

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    This is amazing.

    Wow. This really hits the heart for me. I was raped when I was younger by my step fateher and a friend of his. So, I kinda know how your friend felt. It is horrible to know that there are people like this in the world. No one deserves this. I would not wish this upon anyone. No one knows how bad this stuff hurts. No one understands the pain you feel, Not only physically, But emotionally as well. I think rape is a very versitile subject to write about. But the way you did it. I have never read a piece like this. You did a sensational job. You have a great talent. Keep it up!


  • Xx.Toxic.xX
    April 5
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    haunting and dark. nice job.


  • WednesdayJade
    April 1

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    Wow. That one was actually painful to read. Very disturbing and upsetting. I actually felt the fear in this one and the helplessness and hurt and... I don't even know.
    This was very powerful... and distressing I think because it was more graphic... you describe screaming and being shouted at and hit and just wanting to die. And then there's the fact that it's gang rape as well.
    Wow. Well done, there's a lot of emotion here.
    x x x


  • in the dark blue
    March 31

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    this is a maginifcant and dark write...absolutely sinsational..loved every bit of it..wanted to let you know that you are in the finals..great job.
    Sarah


    • Jazzlyn
      March 31
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      thank you it happened to my friend a few years ago
      ... she is no longer with us


  • JadedSparrow
    March 27

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    Graphic, yet no less beautiful. I could almost hear your screams and they chilled my soul to its core. The flow was flawless. Great write.

    JS


  • ShaantSteele
    March 22

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    Depressing but still amazing

    It shows a lot of emotion that hits home for a lot of people, i think that this one is my favorite you've ever done


  • Shan52908
    March 22

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    wow.. this is a very powerful and emotional poem.. i could feel the pain by just reading it..but this was a very good poem..


  • Toxic Stardust
    March 12

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    woa...this is really good. I can really feel the power and emotion in it. great poem...good luck!
    Alicia Lynn


  • Brigid-goddess
    March 9

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    Oh this is so deeply sad.. I love every word! keep it up and never suppress anyting that comeout of your heart...

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