She has no empire
And has kissed no frogs.
She is not royalty
and holds no court.
And yet on this most
memorable of days,
she lives in a palace.
Were ladies in waiting
carry out her every wish,
and attend her makeup and hair,
while chefs of world
renown prepare a celebratory feast.
Fit for a king and queen
but made just for her.
so it's easy to see why
she cannot shake the feeling that today,
she is a princess.
Any and all thoughts.
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good
good write
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i love it... it says alot in a little if you get what im saying
very much worth the read -
oh...it is short and cute
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Interesting write.
It's short, simple, but worth the read.
I like it. 'Tis cute!
I love your username.
Good penning!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who Lost All -
Daughter of Night
This is a nice poem prince I like it short and simple but very good
Sincerly,
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hey
so sweet!! nicely written
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ohh my! I love it! wow best poem i have ever read!
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Its amazing the imagery that you show. I loved this immensely and I find it beautiful in everyway possible. Good job. xx
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i love it...
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Neat.
In the line,
While chefs of world,
Renown prepare a celebratory feast,
I think you could put Renown on the line above,
While chefs of world renown
Prepare a celebratory feast.
Otherwise it would just be too long and it breaks the rhythm a bit. other than that, Good Job! -
Good.
this is good. really good, i love the part where you said, She has no empire
And has kissed no frogs.
She is not royalty
and holds no court.
^^really good part.
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good write dark. love it
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This is very cute, You can picture it all happening in your head. Nice choice of words
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awe this was darling
s keep on writing dear
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Aw. Veryy cute(: I liked this. Every gal should get her chance to feel like a princess. <3
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Aw
This was very cute. I adored it. Well written and told a story wonderfully. Great job.
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loved it!
I LOVED IT and i hope it all works out for you and ur princess. -
aww for some reason this makes me sad
but this is a great and emotional poem
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i love it very original
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aww, that's so cute!
I liked all the Princess-mentions.
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wow. that's good. i can see what your saying. the girl is just...hard to explain better than you. great write friend.
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I love this ALOT!
Its cute how she doesnt have an empire or has no court, but at the ned she feels like a princess. Its really cute. -
This is very beautiful...especially to a girl like me who knows the feeling...I always want to be special but I never seem quite special enough to anyone...then there is one special day a year (my bday) where people treat me with the love and kindness I wish I had all year round...but no one cares enough to even try...
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Awwah...
How sweet. I love it! It's very good, Prince. Very nice. The whole thing...It's just beautiful. I love you!
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Aww i love this, it short and sweet but to the point. I hope the girl you wrote this for loves it just as much
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