The music playing not far from here,
will guide me through to greater light.
As long as music stays so near,
the sun and moon will shine more bright.
The music plays without a fear,
knowing the moon will shine tonight.
Author notes
I wrote this for a class on AP. It is a rhyming scheme poem of ABABAB, meaning the lines 1 ,3, 5 rhyme and lines 2, 4, 6 rhyme.
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Comments
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wonderful Job! I feel so much beyond the music, you express yourself well! Thank-you so much for entering this contest!!! I enjoyed reading this! Love Sara!!!
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I see a deeper meaning than just about music...
I really like this. It leaves the readers with an open mind..able to take out more than just one thing from this.
I like this rhyme scheme, is one I use often.
thanks for entering -
Wow. This is also really good.
I LOVE music! I listen to the radio or my cd player a lot and I also really enjoy playing the piano and singing. Music is awesome!!!! Great job!! 
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the light of music is awesome!!!
this is really awesome! i like it have a nice day and keep writing!! -Slick
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