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One Last Time

One last look
At places always the same
One last breath
Of an air so sweet
One last kiss
From an old flame

Then I’m off
Off to the stars
Wild into tomorrow
Liberating souls
With my song
At the end of the rainbow

One last turn
Around the bend
One last drag
Of pure elation
One last spark
Before the end

Then I’m off
Off to the stars
Wild into tomorrow
Liberating souls
With my song
At the end of the rainbow

One last can
Of that sweet surprise
One last message
To send to you
One last gaze
On your lovely eyes

Then I’m off
Off to the stars
Wild into tomorrow
Liberating souls
With my song
At the end of the rainbow

They say tomorrow is just a child
Of yesterday
And even if it’s true
There’s always
One last time
With you

Then I’m off
Off to the stars
Wild into tomorrow
Liberating souls
With my song
At the end of the rainbow

Author notes

This could be a song, I'm not sure yet. But it IS a testimony to the life I know here, before I head off to NYC.

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  • Jeric
    July 17
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    I'll applaud myself for this one.