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Salvation

 

Prayerfully I walked in placid night,

feeling His breath soft on my face.

Seeking mercy for my mistakes,

along with His forgiving grace.

 

An opaline moon lit my way,

while fulgent stars performed their dance.

His presence strong within my heart,

as I looked upon His rich expanse.

 

So thankful to have heard His call,

when the Holy Spirit spoke my name.

Humbly I fell on bended knees,

surrendering to God all my shame.

 

With strong avowal of Jesus Christ,

I atoned my deepest sins to Him.

My Savior then and forever more,

forgave me everyone of them.

 

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  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    March 23
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    Beautiful

    a well written poem full of your emotion and faith, Great job and best of luck to you, Boog


  • Wandika gold member
    March 22

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    So you

    I love your poem and admire your steadfast faith. Something more of the world needs to come to realize. He is there and he does make all things possible.

    Jim


  • GenUWinePoet
    March 20
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    Beautiful

    very inspiration write to our creator and lord. braVO!


  • GenUWinePoet
    March 20
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    this is a very beautiful dedication to the Lord Jesus Christ. Rhymed well. interesting.


  • Blue30
    March 20
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    Beautiful words expressed very well. Best of luck to you in the contest.


  • poetsruletheworld
    March 20
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    Very beautiful this has a fel of serenity and peace to it. nicely penned.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    March 20

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    A wonderful testament to your faith in rhyme. A pleasure to read, enjoy and linger on, which of course, comes as no surprise. Beautiful. Just beautiful. ~Pamela


  • waydownuponjoy
    March 20

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    let us pray ...

    and certainly your poem has shared what is not secret but causes a good feeling of security for you. j y


  • raspberry Greeters member
    March 20
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    wonderful!!!! just wodnerful..

    god bless u Sam..


  • spideracer gold member
    March 15

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    A beautifully written spiritual poem, and your faith in the one above shines through your words here. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.


  • Frogzter gold member
    March 12

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    Oh Pam, what can I say? Everytime I read one of your fine works of spiritual poetry, I am moved. You make me examine my own faith and motives. You make me feel praise and worship. You remind me of who I am in Christ! This is beautiful my friend!

    BLessings,

    Frogz~

  • goalsv
    March 10

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    A beautiful praise and prayer. Your flow is perfect so the read is easy. Walking in ?God's grace, what better place to be? The third stanza is such a testimoy of faith. I hope many read it and take it too heart.


  • Legend silver member
    March 10
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    As one who has no religious leanings
    This still does not stop me from enjoying the wonderful piece presented here,
    The language is put to excellent use, the rhyme and flow of the piece pulls the reader along in a manner that is never strained As one who loves the melody of fine poetry
    I love it Well done
    Good luck in the contest


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    March 10
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    Amen, sister, amen!


  • Peripatetic gold member
    March 9

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    As a person of faith who depends very much on redeeming grace, I found this a compelling testimony. By faith we experience the beauty of creation with the joy of being known by the Creator. Through grace we comprehend the awesome power of that same Creator as the sustaining force by which we shall live through eternity.
    This will be a difficult poem for those without faith or knowledge of grace. Perhaps though, it shall be a means of grace for one who is contemplating the meaning of existence.


  • Matt Holck
    March 9
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    stagnate pools wash clean in the expanse


  • Emile
    March 9

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    Comforting

    Your feelings surface and carry the reader into an emotional tide and let it wash over us. The words are meaningful and the message is tenderly offered and accepted.


  • Selestial
    March 9
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    Simply beautiful.


  • queenie
    March 9

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    as usual, a prime example of true poetry.the rhymes are clean, the subject matter griping, the flow is easy. this is just what you are made of and it always makes you a winner. my best to you in the contesr.


  • CountryCousin
    March 9

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    Very spiritual.

    I can see your feeling and love for Christ coming through in this very beautiful poem. It is very inspirational and spiritual. A true talent of yours.


  • ZeInkslinger
    March 9

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    well done.
    A Wonderful way to describe the feeling of living within God's Grace-His Amazing Grace!
    I believe He is well pleased.
    God bless,
    ZeInkslinger

  • dazzahotspur
    March 9
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    i like it.it's very good.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    March 9

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    How enthralling, inspiring and just plain good...your sentiments and devotion shines bright herein good luck to you in the contest

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