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Saint Patricks Day

You are my sweet leprechaun

even though no one can see

you hide among the shamrocks

just waiting there for me

 

Maybe St. Patrick sent you

how lucky can I be

to have you for my dearest friend

and that you love just me

 

Your green eyes are my weakness

they mesmerize me still

I tremble at your tender touch

and follow your caring will

 

When I walk down the green path

amid the shamrocks I hear you say

Hi precious I'm waiting for you

to celebrate our St. Patricks Day

 

 

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prompts...luck, green eyes, green path...1,2,9...

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  • Kari gold member
    March 29
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    aw so nice.


  • LadyElbereth
    March 24

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    Whimsical

    I thought this adorable what a wonderful write to this prompt very cute indeed my heartfelt thank you for this most delightful post.

    Lady E


  • jcat gold member
    March 20
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    I agree......very cute indeed!!

  • So cute - all I have to say

  • Pretty.

    A lovely St. Patrick's Day poem. This was a pleasure to read. Good one.

  • Oh how lovely! Just beautiful with excellent flow and rhyme.
    Thank you so much for your entry.
    Gaylene


  • arafura gold member
    March 9
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    Really good! Loved it.

  • Written with good meter and flow of the rhyming verse--Excellent imagery and take on the prompt.
    I wish you the best in the contest!


  • Oleander
    March 9
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    Loved your poem! It's full of cheer and quite a lucky one indeed.

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