How could I let you leave
how could I have been so stupid,
so irresponsible,
to let you go off and leave my side.
I shouldn't have let you leave.
I should have saved you when it was still possible
for you to come back.
How could I have let you go dear?
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very good..... i liked it
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Such a painful pondering...very touching words!
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Good job
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How many times we each ask that of ourselves and the other involved. I know I have. Great job on this one!!!
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i really like this poem. i know it's hard when you let someone go and regret it.
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