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The Roving Archaeologist

The Roving Archaeologist

(ζητείτε και ευρήσετε!*) 

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In Ashkelon, he excavated Roman bathhouses,

brothels, fountains, theatres, erotic vases,

palm-size ceramic oil-lamps enacting love.

 

The corn god journeys from hades to earth,

unveiled with pride on a mural in San Bartolo.

He fingered those muscled thighs, mythic and Maya.

 

Driving into the dry Kalahari, he wrestled

found symbols and syntax of rock art,

its veil solid, between men and their gods.

 

Resplendent, gold earrings glittered

from tombs of ancient Nimrud-on-Tigris

as he moved aside bizarre, live shells.

 

Then, in damnable dust, alone

he scurried for cover

from hospitable hostility -

gunships spraying hot gravel.

 

Navigating the Nile to its delta nip,

he recalled his companion's hand,

warmed in Egyptian sun, smooth to his touch,

and they both watched the sunset-bank dim

where Osiris, in gloom, doused his wheel of fire.  

 

He can smell her, even now,

clean, like fresh rain ... on desert sands

where, nearby, lay Saqqara, City of the Dead

and he, leaping in the dark necropolis:

 

“I remember you,” he had murmured.

“Perhaps you do,” she had said,

and he felt her throat thrill to his lips

strumming his attuned body

before he grasped 

         these were her very words…

uttered in the night air five millenia

back to the first, the Step Pyramid

rising in tiers.

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* Seek and ye shall find.

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  • Draig aine gold member
    July 7

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    a most excellent write

    you capture well the thrill of the hunt

    He can smell her, even now,

    clean, like fresh rain ... on desert sands

    it is almost like we are combing the desert sands with you


  • ronnica
    April 20

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    I have stood in the sand by the ruins of the step pyramid with only my guide. She was far less romantic in her vision than you are here.
    Your accounting is so lovely I will remember it all day.
    Here we have something in common, I hear they have just found the tomb of Anthony and Cleopatra.


  • Barry Hodges
    March 22
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    I found this most interesting as I am always delighted to meet a fellow traveller! I have travelled much and suffered many terrible familial losses as a brief investigation of my poems will show.

    I enjoyed your Greek quotation as I have always had a weakness for a bit of Greek.


  • leo2
    March 20
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    I think it would be really cool to see and experience the search for antiquities up close and personal. No telling what treasures might be unearthed in the quest for knowledge and beauty. Methinks this one may garner a treasure of its own.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

  • I thought it was just a funny write about the sexy archeologist but that last stanza really caught my interest and gave me goosebumps.

    Enjoyable write.


  • Keith
    March 9

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    Excellent. If ye seek, ye may not necessarily find what you desire. The poem took me back to my schooldays, when we used to do an interpretation on the opening of one of the Pyramids (I forget which one). But I remember the Egyptologist's description of how he broke into the sealed chamber of one of the King's dancing girls, and for a brief second gazed upon the beauty of her face before all crumbled into dust. There was a particularly good line about the tiny cymbals which she wore around her wrists and ankles, which chimed softly as they slid from the slab "as if mourning the death of their once-young owner". (I'm no' right sure whether that's a precise quote, by the way).
    But I am sure that this is a cracking poem, and I'm even more sure that I'm gonnae have a hell of a bother judging the contest. Ach well, I asked for it!

    I'm putting in a link here for anyone who wants to read more, though I guess the writer may know the link already.

    http://nefertiti.iwebland.com/index.html


    • Lyndon gold member
      March 9
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      Thank you.

      The link will be useful. My archaeologist has explored the mortuary chapel of Princess Idut.

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