I've written many love poems,
to boyfriends of the past.
This is one I really mean,
because to me you are the best.
No matter what happens,
you stick by my side.
Through the laughter and tears,
you will always be here.
You see past my perfected mask,
to what lies within.
You've seen me at my best,
yet you still love me at my worst.
I do not understand and maybe never will,
how someone as amazing as you,
could love a less than average me.
Maybe things are better that way.
I love you with every bit of me,
and I'm sure I always will.
Your smile charm wisdom and kindness,
you amaze me more everyday.
A contest entry
- for my favorites only---ok now its for everyone by Shelby K.
800 points, ended August 26, 78 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this is for someone special so I'd appreciate some constructive criticism
Comments
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this is very sweet! i love it! the emotion is incredible.
i can relate to this!
good work! keep it up!
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i looked at a couple of ur other poems and this is my favorite one! so cute ! =]
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Very sweet!!! You did an amazing job with this piece =) Keep it up!!
<3 - Jess
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i'd be embarrased to tell some one i like, something like this poem...not becuse it sound stupid becuse it DOSENT...i'm just shy like that...but this dose sound good and if you think this poem says all it needs to say then go SING it to your specail some one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....if you like reading manga theres a manga called
SNOW DROP this poem totally remins me of it....long and sweet romance story!!!!!..if you are ever intrested it's wroth reading!!!!
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