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lv...Just Imagine

This is how my lover turned me on...Quote!

 

Just imagine what I ask

close your eyes and see

forget that I am whispering

let your mind wander free

 

Listen in the darkness

let my voice soothe your fears

pretend that you are loving me

while I kiss away your tears

 

Move your hand in repetition

to the sensual words I say

know that I am touching you

in erotic dreams we play

 

Sink into my loving arms

let your mind wander free

just imagine what you feel is real

and reach great heights with me

 

Mmmmmmmmm...

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  • judmc
    June 19

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    Good Write

    A well written "naughty" poem, some nice thoughts behind the romantic imagery,flows and rhymes nicely
    Quite a nice read ..George...

  • Bruce silver member
    June 18
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    This is lovely.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    March 14

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    And..this way you are making the life very warm and very wonderful moment..love the scenario and the move of the words ..well done..and thanks for sharing..

  • Papagallo
    March 10
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    Now this is beautiful. I like the last stanza best.

  • SimplySonnets gold member
    March 10

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    Your words enchant

    WOW! a fine write full of wonderful images, the best for me are L 6 to 12, not certain the quote is required, thank you.


  • ali-a-fallen-angel
    March 10
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    lovely very sensual! good luck


  • arafura gold member
    March 9
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    Very good. Well expressed, poet!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    March 9

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    HOT! HOT! HOT!---
    Very sensual composition with good flow to the rhyming verse!
    I wish you the best in the contest!


  • Arizona Sunset
    March 9

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    very beautiful!!! Sweet lovely imagery, and a joy to read winner in my book. best to you in the contest. blessings always ~


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 9
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    This is really lovely. Sends me off thinking about all sorts of beautiful things. Sheila

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