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I want to love you

I am thinking of you all the time
wondering too
if you
will ever be mine

The way you make me laugh
and smile
Baby I would do
anything
Just to hold you
for a day

I know your scared
and so am i
but how are we going to know
if we don't try

We could make it work
I want to show you how
I'll love you forever
and again

I want to love you.

Author notes

For you Kat

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  • wow, idk what to say!! if only we lived closer to each other!! i love this poem so much <3

  • Thank You.

  • arunparui
    March 17

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    Very Personal

    Without your "Author notes" this poem would have been a universal one .Thanks Kat who has won such a surrenderring and sweet heart of yours who can publicly and so boldly disclose her passionate feelings of heart.

  • very Well.
    but it's not superb form of poetry
    you can improve thought
    keep writing

    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • justapoet
    March 17

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    Oh that is very heartfelt and delightful. I do hope you get what your heart so badly desires and that you have a very happy future together. This was well done SurrenderMyHeart


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 9

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    UPLIFTING AND TENDER!!!

    This is touching and sweet! You words are tender and will bring love in their heart.

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