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Reveries

Are you only then a dream
And nothing more than this
Imagination's dance
As memories reminisce

To swirl around in yesteryears
And spend the time among
Promises and summer nights
And walks when we were young

We talked of love forever
And thought the sun would rise
On each day of life together
Dreams were in our eyes

Way back then in yesteryears
And now it's come to this
A dream my heart can smile with
When old thoughts reminisce

Artie

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  • condor gold member
    April 11

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    A beautiful piece that speaks so softly of times that one remembers i imagine with a smile. This was beautifully penned. Rhyme, rhythm and flow were just wonderful and the write left me feeling quite relaxed. Thanks you so much for the read.

  • Sweet n short like the cool autum breeze....... soft ..... feelings of days gone by.....n seems like a dream.