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Secret

You'll never know
what I'm thinking about.

The answer:









You.

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  • winterbound. gold member
    March 30

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    This contest is going to be hard to change I'm getting so many good entries, I love your choice of words and how you put the last word on the last line and put space between the line ''The answer:'' it was perfect little bit of suspense and surprise.
    Thank you for the entry.


  • trekkergirl
    March 25

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    nicely written so few words yet it says plenty... Made me smile thinking that you were thinking about me. Thanks for sharing that with us.


  • etoile
    March 20
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    oh hot damnn
    i like it.
    amazing job in 10 words lovely ♥


    • letters to no one
      March 20
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      Ha thank you, this was so difficult for me to write

      And it's not letting me rate your comment


  • tenderheart22
    March 10

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    Very sweet and to the point.

    I like it.


  • SimplyNoodle
    March 9
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    I like it, Good job, Keep writting.
    ~ Chelsey

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