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Never Noticed

Never thought
Id be alone
In the shadows
For so long
Watching you walk by
Glowing
In the suns rays

Did you ever notice?

The night turned cold
The stars faded away
Everytime you slept
My heart cried for you
While the sky wept
You never noticed
Me in the shadows depths

No, you never noticed

Never knew
I’d be lost
To the darkness
For so long
When you passed by
Shimmering
In the moonlight

Did you ever notice?

The birds stopped singing
The world stopped turning
Everytime you slept
My heart called out to you
While the sky wept
You never noticed
Me in the shadows depths

No, you never noticed
You never noticed

And now I’m stuck
Between the light
And the dark
The day and the night
You never came
And now
There’s no light
To lead my way

Did you ever notice?
No, you never noticed
You’re the angel
That guided my way
No, you never noticed
Never noticed
Everytime you slept
The sky wept
No, you never noticed
And now I’ve lost my way
Cause you never came

You never came

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  • Dennis Pickering
    May 4

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    Hello Nell, been a long time

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    Well sweet know that we're all alone
    And we are only here to hone
    The blade that is our consciousness
    And we grow not without duress.

    But happiness causes growth too
    And gladness often does ensue
    An unfortunate circumstance
    That has entered life's joyfull dance.

    The light is there just realize
    Light has not fallen from your skies
    Light seeks you if you will see
    The light that's within every tree.

    Every tree? this life's but a branch
    Of the journey we're to enhance
    As our consciousness does mature
    And basks in this lifetimes allure.

    Perhaps it's time to notice more
    Of great things entering your door
    'Cause new things often do erase
    Familiars who've fallen from grace.

  • Cwm
    March 10

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    Poem of loniless oh in its beauty tho! I love it.. lol... me and you have alot in common and you'll see what I mean.. when I post my newest one. Well done nell.


  • heinzs silver member
    March 9
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    It's lonely in the shadows. Hope you find your way out into the light.


  • Antipodi
    March 9
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    Beautiful bittersweet write so many times have many experienced this and can empathize