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Dance For Me

 


Dance for me, my love.

Take pride in the woman you are,
Expose your erogenous nature.

Be the enchantress,
the enticer who arouses from
beneath the surface of a

Choir girl persona.

Befuddle me, salicious inamorata.

 

Elucidate passion into impulse,
Actuate those barbarous acts

Rekindle burning desires.

Be the delicious nymphet tonight

and in your dance, afford no lenity.


Taunt me amorous presence,

Empower my demand so as you come to me,

Exhaust my desire, but do not heed my pleas.

 

Bestow your flair to arouse my appetite,

For I will desire you all the more.

When mine eyes behold what I cannot assure,
– just out of reach,

your beauty overwhelms me.

Dance for me, my love
For I am forever yours.

 

 

 

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  • wow...

    And I mean wow ...
    How seductive can one poem be? Haha. It's kind of breath taking, it's a beautiful poem full of raw emotion and passion . Sensual, sexy, success!
    Keep it up
    Hannah
    x


  • Charmaine
    April 30

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    I really liked this poem. It seems you used an unread part of the dictionary to write it- the words were so different.
    And it sounds like you are tempting your lover to tease. It is really good!


  • MuteForNow
    March 31

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    my favorite line was when you called your mistress in the poem a nymphet. beautiful, sexy, and passionate at the same time.

    I'd love to dance for you one day


  • Nickelspring gold member
    March 17

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    Loved this, so sensual. I was led along by your lovely word choice
    KW~


  • adolescente
    March 16

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    well done. i like the imagery and seductiveness in this poem. the adjectives are very descriptive and well-written. i wouldn't send this to the person to whom it was intended, though, because it may scare them just a wee bit. all in all, a great write. i like.


  • rollingzen
    March 16
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    well done


  • Catacomb
    March 16
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    Good write. Not my usual genre, but I enjoyed the passion very much. Well done

  • Wow!!

    Another awesome write!! So full of passion and desire.....this one took my breath away!! Good luck in the contest!

  • graybeard
    March 10
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    Very good write

    Once again, you make me look askance at my own humble work, and inspire me to greater effort.


  • ennovy silver member
    March 10

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    dynamic-ly beautiful sensual words showing your wonderful talent and erotic imagery........excellent...novy


  • albymyheart gold member
    March 10

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    Fantastic! So steaming with desire, lust or love (who cares) that want, that need is there and I felt it. Loved this write...alby


  • MorbidGarden
    March 9

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    this was fantastic...of course, not that i expected anything less...

    very erotic...breathtaking...wonderful...

    the words reflect the poet??


  • geckogirl silver member
    March 9
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    awww nice piece & perfect background to go with it Del....


  • lostsouls12
    March 9

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    i am very speechless right now. your writing was so powerful and full of so much emotion. that i am still trying to catch my breathe.

  • loverly
    dude

    .


  • maralisa silver member
    March 9

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    aw a beautuful poem you took my breathe away throughout you are wonderful at love poems my friend good luck in the contestmaralisa

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