Should have believed her
When she said
You were bad news
Should of listened
When they said
You would break my heart
I should have realised
After the first time
When you promised me
Never again
I should of realised
That i was hurting everyone around me
Just to keep you happy
Author notes
I was looking through my drafts and found this, i dont even remember writing it
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Sometimes, our own happiness can be crippling if we aren't careful and if we refuse to listen to people who are trying to watch out for us.
Your words echo life and are filled with emotion.
Great work -
Wow. This is a powerful poem. Very sad, even in its poetic beauty. I loved this. Glad you found it so you could share it!
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Omg
i love it when that happens
you find a random poem
that you cant remmeber writing
but this is really good
totaly explains me right nowww
love you x -
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yeah it was weird i think i wrote it around the same time as my other poem should of known cause it goes along the same lines.
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