without his eyes, he
sees her -- hearing, touch, taste, smell.
to her, their love kissed
-- at that blink; his grain of sand
became her Mother Of Pearl
-- together sun-moons.
Author notes
Love has the duality of a kiss as well as the heart.
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #60 by Aussie Gypsy.
700 points, ended March 23, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What are your thoughts?
Comments
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This is nicely done although I am not much of a fan of all the -- everywhere but of course that's just a personal thing. Well done here. Best to you in the contest
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Very nice! The imagery written here moves me. I like this one!
Kiki
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Beautiful photograph! Thank you so much for commenting on my poetry, too. I am working on my next poetry book tentatively titled "More Bits Of Wonder." Take a look at my profile for info about my first book.
I am a Christian also. I have been giving serious thought to publishing a book on Christian poetry. Your "Hallelujah...Amen" poem really motivates me to write one. Thanks again for your thoughtful and encouraging words. Peace.
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