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His nominous touch




                        from cold, from snow
              awaken in sweet, sweet celadon
                        His fingers of spring






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  • azure85 gold member
    March 11

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    from cold, from snow
    awaken in sweet, sweet celadon
    His fingers of spring

    Very beautiful, L2 is very pretty and bring out the sense of scent. Thank you so much.


  • XLadyElinorX
    March 9
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    lovely

    ♠ Lady Elinor

  • ocerus
    March 9
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    Yep! I'm finally beginning to like haiku. And this one is a gem, no changes necessary. - oce