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Cracks in the wall

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He takes stock,
and shares it with the bitter winds
as fine cracks
open to recession's call,
in this winter blustered
by such discontent.

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Photo by David Beckman

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  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    March 10, 2009

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    good poem

    "and shares it will the bitter winds"
    that doesn't make sense to me...typo i'm guessing?


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    March 9, 2009
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    A short but, wonderfully written
    piece here. All the best to you with it!




    Jeremy0826


  • going nowhere
    March 9, 2009

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    this photo just makes me sad looking at it... such weight on his shoulders... as if it started to rain, and he wouldn't even think to use the umbrella in his own hand. good luck to you.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    March 9, 2009

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    Your words paint the World's recession perfectly
    and the burdens of society hung on shoulders
    Well versed and really enjoyed reading... sadly in a way!
    Best wishes Julie


  • Jesann gold member
    March 9, 2009
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    A short but powerful write.
    Great take on the prompt.
    Very well done.

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