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xX•spilling.FEARS•Xx

my t(f)ears spill o u t
as I climb out of d.i.s(eased)

waste stung on the ♥inside♥

battered

           AND

                abused

t.r.y not to go in s/e/a/r/c/h

               of

 

 

                        ♥YOU♥

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Another hopless try... and Dirtypretty  

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  • Kathraina silver member
    March 16
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    This is a fantastic job, I love the simplicity yet complexity of this. Bravo!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    March 9

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    A new style and you did great with
    this one too sis! I hope that you do
    well with it in the contest! Good luck!




    Jeremy0826

  • Bruce silver member
    March 9
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    A new style for you but well done!


  • GoodbyeFarewell
    March 9

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    i love this i wanna learn to write like this great job amazing write keep up the good work chrissy very beautiful keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day