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[ Cleaning, cooking, and caring for three instead of one, ]

Cleaning, cooking, and caring for three instead of one,
with the possibility of a fourth on the way.
Eighteen year old girl with the life of a wedded woman,
battling for custody of one who is not hers.
While balancing finances seem's a battle already lost.

A man with no motivation or energy,
and considerable f_cked up views on life,
clashes with the intelligent yet doubtful girl he's chosen to make a life with.

A young one being a seven year old,
while caught in the middle of battles between parents.
The girlfriend's family supporting the three as if they all were their own.


Constant lack of compromise; clash of the titans occur.
Happier without eachother,
the duo clings to love as an excuse.

Eight months in the making,
this young girl has lost all sight of the future,
while missing the freedom she barely stepped foot in.

Recession has society stifling temptation,
while this girl can barely live the life she wants. 
Marijuana, she can no longer indulge herself in.
Behind his back she does, shes afraid to divulge that info.

He has pictures of woman he met from the internet,
pictures not hiding anything but her face.
He believes there's nothing wrong,
while she scorns him for cheating.
Should she really be doing so,
when she does worse on webcam?
I say do as I say, not as I do.

Cleaning, cooking, and caring for three instead of one,
with the possibility of a fourth on the way.
Eighteen year old girl with the life of a wedded woman,
battling for custody of one who is not hers.
While balancing finances seem's a battle already lost.


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