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~ Thoughts In The Rain


The rain shatters over the window pane
As I lie in bed listening to the music of memory
Inside, my soul is dying.. inside I'm falling apart
How your words, your inspirations betrayed me

Deep in the heart, we know its no more there
What did you mean when you said I cant live
Can't live without you, I love you baby
When your silence was all that you could give?

~ * ~

Author notes

Just something that struck me while it was raining in the night..

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    August 24

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    A dreamer and a thinker, what an awesome combination!! Your muse is in possession of a rare and powerful tool, keep it flowing, Poet!!
    Peace & hugs,
    xx Cyn xx

  • Basma Mashhadi
    August 20

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    simple but profound!

    u truly have the gift of putting emotions into words beautifully, Mashallah


  • Tabzz
    March 21

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    woww

    poem of the year!!!.. i love youuu ... im so proud to be your friend yar ur one of a kind


  • Tabzz
    March 21
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    omgg sehrishh ....i love you..a brilliant work of art MUUUAh


  • mina nagi gold member
    March 11

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    I like pittar patter sound of music as if it's trying to speak to me in a vague lingo... I liked the sentiments of these verse....

    mina


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 9

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    Such a vivid photograph you snap in the corner of my mind, and how the rain sometimes brings so much clarity. You amaze me, and I love the way you express yourself in so many ways. Peace my ap Wifey! Love always, Timothy

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