Hey Bitch, listen up!
I am the one in control,
not you.
I tell you how to love,
and when to want.
I control you desires,
and you do not.
It my choice, on
who you can talk to.
Who you lose your breath to.
Looks don't matter to me.
Thats not what I see.
I see whats inside.
whats inside the lies,
the stories,
and the heart.
I see it all.
So don't think you know,
when really you don't.
Don't act like you care.
It's me that chooses when, and where.
Sincerely Your heart
A contest entry
- Almost anything Goes! by NickelleteXninja.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I need a good laugh or two or three or etc... so come on in and make me laugh already, PW welcome. Big Points by echo-ink.
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OMFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!
I was about to drop kick your face! I thought it was to a girl or something. You were about to get a very irate phone call from me as well. but wow...okay i like it now
love,
mylee -
Damn
forgot theses again
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Lol
okay that was really hillarious. Though I thought it was going to be his girlfriend rather than heart. (which I think would make it funnier). just make sure you watch your grammar (I mess it up all the time and have to reread my pieces a ton till I get it right so no biggy) "actually I just found like five in one of my poems." Very good and funny. so much different then the other one I read -
Damn I was gonna say...
someones a could bastard lol
didnt end the way I thought XD
Very interesting though
and unique
thanks for entering
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unique
I try to be unique in everything I do. Not to be differant but just to be me.
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