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I am but, a butter cutter
when I hear the people mutter
will you look at all that clutter
That guys a f----g nutter
Let them go on with their chatter
for to me it doesn’t matter
I think they really seek to flatter
In truth, I’m madder than a hatter
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Author notes
Its that Pen again
Please tell me what you think
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Hello My Friend
I can always count on you for a smile and wonderful rhyme. This was so cute and a delight to read. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy
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Overall I really liked this. (My personal feelings aside) Very clever writing. Glad I popped in. You are a favorite that I have missed reading.
Sam
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Thank you Sam I know your feelings on such words So it is more than special that you read and commented.
I guess i am a little like yourself i don't get to read you own wonderful work as much as i used to
I have never forgotten that it was you who handed me my first Gold award
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I didn't know or remember that...too cool!! You deserve awards for your work. YOU are awesome...
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You tell them
While the rest of us stutter...mac
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Such a cute little ditty
oh but you are witty...
wish some of that madness would take over my pen. Been in such a dry spell as of late, but no nevermind... looky what I can find! You never disappoint my friend!
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The Mad Hatter!
A wizard’s hat may hide the fact
That what’s inside is oft’ abstract,
And though his point may droop with weight
There’s more to him than mental state.
The pen may push this Legend’s soul
To misuse time - abuse his role,
Standby until he pens a phrase,
That tends to set that pen ablaze!
j y
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I know the Pen's a little mad
and sometimes he can be so bad
but very seldom is he sad
and I for one am very glad
I know the Pen can be a tease
his humour it can be a wheeze
his mind is somewhere on a breeze
but keep your poems coming ... please!
It takes a nutter to know a nutter
Sue x
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Mad she said, that cant be true
perhaps sometimes a little blue
in using words others won't do
but then again thats nothing new
Legend's sometimes mystified
about my talent, thats denied
but let me state that i take pride
in being officially certified
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Lol...fun with words ~ our English language may be complex and often awkward for others to learn, but it sure is fun to play around with!
Great playful job here. Nicely done!
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I agree it is great to mess around with words Some times the shock others they cheer or sadden but every one does something for the reader/listener
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ohh you just never stop to amaze me! You really
are the master of rhymes & I enjoyed this read
very much! Take care.
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Thank you meena a little naughty perhaps but hey what the heck
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Loved this. Very funny!
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Thank you Kiran much appreciated
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