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Cognition

 

 

 

 

There is no beginning

nor end,

no universe

but a dream we think we've had.

 

 

 

 

We are vapor

floating

through vacant rooms

inhabited by illusionary visions.

 

 

 

 

We sink deep through levels

of an echoing sound

never heard,

a picture never seen.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Mysterier silver member
    September 22
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    i love your style. i have similar cognitions.

  • illusionary visions - prestidigitation, it is all sleight of hand existence, we pull a rabbit from a hat and while the world's looking at that, we fuck them over lol

  • That's what I call looking on the bright side!


  • vieve gold member
    March 19

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    Beautifully precise in all its starkness. This has such a satisfying, polished quality - a diamond sharpness cutting through to the ever-evasive truth.

  • And so true

    The poems issuing from kernels of truth have the greatest impact on one's heart. This world is the true illusion, as all the world's mystics say.


  • Antipodi
    March 8

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    Woah your brush has painted an abstract verse in pen an ethereal wisp of prose that sings in imagery ...excellently crafted poet

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