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Thoughts

Dried flowers,
Old Pictures,
Faded...
Into time.

They lay there,
As I lay in the grass.
Thinking of time,
And where it has gone to.

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  • tmoya4646 gold member
    November 27
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    simple yet satisfying

    This poem gives me a great picture about what the person is thinking and why she's laying in the grass. It is because she's reflecting upon her past and is surprised how time flew by so quickly.