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Seeing Him Again

embers ignite a flame
...together
touch of a hand
flutter of butterflies
resting in his arms,
...quietly 
promising he says
”I’ll call you …”

Author notes

PROMPT:“Love is like a friendship caught on fire. In the beginning a flame, very pretty, often hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. As love grows older, our hearts mature and our love becomes as coals, deep-burning and unquenchable.” Bruce Lee

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  • ViolentSerenity
    March 10

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    wow. i love this its short but powerful and to the point the passionate emotions in it are great.
    &hears;ViolentSerenity♥


  • thepoetssoul
    March 8

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    Wondefully written sweet soul, love the loving thoughts
    Thanks for sharing, be blessed in all you do.

    Tony


  • Cannonsfire
    March 8
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    Oh promises promises lol I like this thank you C


  • azure85 gold member
    March 8

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    Oh, what a unique take on the prompt! And she is waiting for that call! Wonderfully written and full of meaning and longing.


  • February Moon gold member
    March 8
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    Beautifully done.


  • crimsondew
    March 8
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    Feeling of love all over this write!!!


  • Dragonbabyx3
    March 8

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    beautiful, yet almost seems to be a longing for love. Does he ever call? A wonderful take on the prompt! good Luck!


  • crimsondew
    March 8
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    All the best!

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