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Loving

Fingers combed
My hair…
Lips brushed mine.

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Memory...

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  • daviscth
    March 9, 2009

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    You have such wonderful imagery in these seven words!!! The words just scream out romance. Good luck in the contest.


  • itsman
    March 8, 2009
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    nice good imagery


  • BearWoman gold member
    March 8, 2009
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    Nice write.


  • crimsondew
    March 8, 2009
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    Aww...such a pretty piece...full of loving thoughts!!!

    All the best!


  • thepoetssoul
    March 8, 2009

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    Lovely thoughts...
    Splendidly written indeed.
    Best to you in all you do.

    Tony


  • ItaloEtkin
    March 8, 2009
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    nice work

    good luck!

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