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2012

The dreaded Winter Solstice has begun
and breezes echo through the Sacred Tree.
Chaos causes fears of aberration
and calendars have stopped in harmony.
I try to see this change objectively
and know this is the coming of an age.
Our planet now has simply turned her page.

The people gather in their sacred shrines
as scientists explain away their fears.
The wars have stopped, there are no borderlines
and heavens have absorbed our human tears.
The wheel of modern science now appears
to lose momentum slowing to a halt
while grass and roots replace the hot asphalt.

The bones of all the bridges are at rest
and transportation simply fades away.
The animals now seem to be possessed
and play with us to pass the time of day.
The towers of the mighty show decay
as lovely flowers blanket them unfurled.
We are creations of a brand new world.

 

 

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  • Cup-a-Joe
    March 16

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    Amera,

    I don't see how you do it. Producing the perfect words every time. And in this one rhyming. I bow to you.
    I don't think it will get here that soon, but the times are changing. The bible is being fulfilled.
    Joe


  • Emmyb gold member
    March 14
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    fantastic write :


  • thepoetssoul
    March 13

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    Hey This is an exellent piece of poetry full of vivid detail.
    The rhythm and rhyme is in wonderful form.
    Your images you have brought forth are stunning.
    Thanks for sharing, be blessed in all you do.

    Tony


  • Cannonsfire
    March 11

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    Again flawless form, sad really though that we have a fixation on when it will end rather than how we can fix it and save it from ending C


  • JohnnyD gold member
    March 11

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    Smiling- I like this

    ou know the year 666AD was supposed to be the advent of the Antichrist however it appears 2008-2009 was the true recognition of the Antichrist to most when they opened their 401K statements?

    However-perhaps the Julian calendar is off up to 45 years so perhaps the year 666 was really the year 621?

    Interesting as the summer of 621 was when I was sold to the Hittite Gypsies for six fat chickens and a bag of maize, so I remember that year well.

    which may explain why I have had my 401K in stable value fund the last three years? Hey 4-5 to 5 percent a year is nothing to sneeze at nowadays- although for this quarter it is only 3.7 or 3.8 percent-but hey- I'll take it!


    good write gal- keep kicking ass!



    Dad

  • Purrsanthema
    March 10

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    How peaceful and how lovely! It certainly beats reading continually about the apocalyptic visions the human race wants to foist upon each other!


  • Desire gold member
    March 9

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    Wow~

    Oh My Word what a message I inhaled and wanted to hear more Excellent this is Beautiful also the rhyme - flawless- Form Queen
    This brought forth a HUGE smile~ as Your work does everytime Wisdom You continue to share
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • IxI
    March 9

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    wow

    Wow this is really an amazing write. Thank you for relaying some of the anxiety and fascination with the possibilities of 2012. I see this outcome as well but like cricketjeff said, can something as bothersome as the end of our world unite the people of earth and can they see for once and start to make the right decisions? the days are looking brighter everyday.
    IXI


  • Legend silver member
    March 9

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    Many believe that this year is truly the time the planet will die Hey as long as its quick i don't give a damn The longer it goes on the more mankind will ruin it anyway
    Perhaps a new beginning is what is needed. I bags being ADAM
    As ever you write work that is not only beautiful but gives the reader food for thought,
    Fancy putting in for EVE


  • StarEyes
    March 9

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    Sis,

    Wow! what a read! You know, I know how close that really is, but yet I have never really stopped and thought about it Silly me.....hehe.

    Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 9

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    2012 will clearly be the end of the World, unless the UK can get a decent number of Athletics medals in the London Olympics

    A form I love written adroitly and with wit and charm. Sadly I can't see anything as trivial as the end of the world convincing people to live responsibly!!!

    Great stuff

    Jeff

  • Papagallo
    March 9

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    My goodness 2012! That is so close it is scary. Loved your poem. I hope to be around in just 3 years to see it all. I am looking forward to 2020.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    March 9

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    I love this! Oh, Amera you are awesome woman!

    Much love,
    mj.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    March 9

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    If this is to be the end of the world and the birth of a new one, then is all I have to say is "bring it on".
    Your imagery is, as always, outstanding and a pleasure to read.

    Love
    Sue

  • TonyT
    March 9

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    If we just look at the number it looks like a balanced seesaw with 2 on both
    side and a "messed up balance point" between. This would show a rough
    ride but probably nothing fully destructive...

    2 0 1 2

    I might have to go back and see what was really going on in 2 0 0 2
    with equal center and maybe I'll have to hang around for 2 2 2 2
    when total balance should come...



    -Tony


  • Pure Thought silver member
    March 8

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    I am ready. It will be the resurrection of God's natural way, hopefully expunging the earth of all greed and ego-centric behavior.

    True Peace will prevail.

    Beautiful my dear, beautiful!

  • Most exellent as always! good luck in the contest!


  • echo-ink
    March 8

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    OMG...
    This is the most beautiful paradise I have ever read.
    So many people are so afraid of the end of the world, but they don't realize that a peaceful beautiful new world will follow, where there will be no more wars or abuse,
    like you said, just beautiful flowers, and peaceful animals, and all of us will be so happy living in the paradise you have just written.

    Thank you so much for this, I LOVE it,





  • maralisa silver member
    March 8

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    aw wow this is very wonderful your imagery and depth is great throughout and your rhyme spot on good luck in the contestmaralisa

  • well done.
    Best wishes in the contest

    Tory

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