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Whatever the heck you want this title to be

In an empty chair
in an empty bar
with an empty bottle
laying  by an empty door
leading into an empty sidewalk
with all its empty people
walking in front of empty cars
going out of an empty city
into an empty world

why am I so god damned afraid
of being

empty

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More of an experiment if anything
tell me what you think

could use some images

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    March 9

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    oooh wow. somthing i can relate to in a wierd way, but i really liked this one. it was short and smashing fantastic. ooh and as for the title.. how bout, i dont know... EMPTY? nice write, keep penning alright!