Trying to make it in this cold world,
But my days just seem to grow darker.
Taking the knife to my wrist;
A scar for the memory of what was.
An addiction I cant shake;
The cold steel sending shudders through me.
Pleasurable moan,
Escaping my lips ever so quietly.
One for the pain I brought you.
Two for the anger from within.
And three for the regretable mistakes,
That i have, and have yet, made...
A danger to myself,
And a curiousity to others.
A look in the mirror,
Reveals a man I no longer know.
Please tell me what you think
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Okay, I have read your comments below and understand that this is not a opersonal thing and in that light, i can give a clear and precise view of this piece. As i read, I saw a soul who seemed to be trying to forgive themselves for the pians they had caused and the pains they would cause. Someone who is desperately trying to cling to a world without any pian, yet continues to dwell and find it. You certainly do look deep into feelings and have a clear understanding of how people in this situation must feel. I must give you full marks for your having insight into the cutting scene. Thanks for the read.
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That's.. Sad. Heh. I like
"One for the pain I brought you.
Two for the anger from within.
And three for the regretable mistakes,
That i have, and have yet, made..."
That was my favorite part so far. It gives.. Uh.. I can't think of the stupid word.. But i know i like it! ^-^ But.. It's also very sad..
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well thank you=-]
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Agreed with Kaii Mart.
The girl will find you. Hopping from one girl to the next is 1-Unhealthy and 2-not worth it. if you are meant to find love, it will find you now.
And this whole emo thing is not good for you. Thank you, but leave the emo to the dead. -
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ew you agree with Ali? lol.... like i told her, that silly goose lol, but like i told her, its not about anyone. just how the poem flowed. im not always writing about someone or something. sometiems words string together and i like the kick, so i work with it.
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*tsk tsk tsk* Zack, stop going emo, kai?
You're better than that. I stopped, and you're stronger than I am. So cut it out, get over whoever is being a bitch to you now, and realize that there's more to life than going from girl to girl, and trying to find love in one of them.
Eventually, she will find you.
So make the best of life while you have it!!!!!!!! -
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I am going to bite you. its a poem. doesnt mean i worte it about anyone. jsut how i felt it flow lol... kids... lol
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