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tantric tango

euphoric soul
erotic phoenix rising from ashes of timebound banality
aroused by accordian tango seduction
dancing through the open door of a music store adjacent
on sultry summer heat this glorious july afternoon
unexpected emotional catalyst
freeing everpresent longing
subterranean passion

upwards from my startled lover's heart
ecstatic joy of emancipating lifeforce
intoxicating primal innocence
infinite depths of incorruptible power surging through rapture
purging painful memories
regrets

motionless sensual peace...
stillpoint bliss of the one and only...






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  • jacbgd2 gold member
    September 23

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    I really like this piece!!!  It is fantastic. The words captivate the reader and hold on until the very end of the piece... My favorite type of write, void puncts., caps and rhyme. I find it difficult to write this type piece.. Thanks for sharing...