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Stained glass strike's cold

A image comes to mind
one with being and feeling,
when this image comes to mind
I can do nothing but wonder.

A image comes to mind
one of flowing and crystals,
when this image strains my mind
I can do nothing but shiver.

A image comes to mind
one with essence and power,
when this image curls around me
I can do all but escape.

A image comes to mind
one of release and sharing,
when this image barricades me
I can go free.

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couples by ~kakaoconad

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  • February Moon gold member
    March 29
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  • awesome take on the prompt! I like how you repeated the line "An image comes to mind" for each stanza...I think that really made this piece unique and gave it a nice flow