I started walking the lost Valentine's road
From Rockford to my home on my own
Losing an ounce of faith every step
The path is getting darker once again
Falling Deeper in the trench, Love's my battlefield
Crawling out restless, with still no will to wield
Crashing, and dropping all my parts
Just to start over, and re-find my heart
I feel like I am dead inside, when I think of her face
What's the point now? I've not seen her for days
Just if I could see her standing near
I'd reach to desperate, tell her "I miss you dear"
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|I called for the one I knew'd be there
|To tell him to find my love, and tell her I met my fear
|I Told him to say goodnight, just one last time
|Never to leave this field I'm in
Sitting here, writing this, I wonder why?
Why Didn't I just let myself lay down and die?
Knowing in the end she'll never be, she'll never be mine
Shes with him, the one I know would be there
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|Hes with her, spreading love
|Spreading love, spreading jealousy spreading fear
Fear that My life was and only is a mirror
...Now I'll never look at myself the same, following the light above
I feel like I am dead inside, when I think of her face
What's the point now? I've not seen her for days
Just if I could see her standing near
I'd reach to desperate, tell her "I miss you dear"
What's the point? She still loves him (think of her face)
I've lost all hope
Where is she now? She's still with him (not seen her for days)
I Don't even want to know
I'd rather just die, to help everyone out (for days)
And leave this world in peace (I miss you dear)
(And leave this world in peace)
Author notes
Key:
| means acoustic guitar background only
|| means a whispering echo
--- means band pause into soft acoustics, or calms into acoustics
A contest entry
- Dying Is The Latest Fasion by SoundsOfSilence.
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Comments
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Yea..
Sitting here, writing this, I wonder why?
Why Didn't I just let myself lay down and die?
Knowing in the end she'll never be, she'll never be mine
Shes with him, the one I know would be there I really like this part. you are very raw worth your emotion and i like it. you dont try to be politically correct, you just lay it all out there. btw i sang this in my head when i read it. XD
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Very beautiful
Thnx for entering & Best of Luck
GloriousGift
Hebz -
This would sound beautiful sung as a song. Very well said, I love the entire thing.
"Just if I could see her standing near
I'd reach to desperate, tell her "I miss you dear" "
That is sweet, touching to the reader, but a very sweet thing to be said.
Thank you very very much for entering my contest.
~~Kitten
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