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In The Darkness of the Night

In the darkness
of the night
some one is dying.
They are laying
there, a knife
in there hand.
Blood pooling around
them, the knife
is bloody.
Who is this
person in the blood?
This person has
died, only a corpse
is left, cold and bloody.
Wait....... I know
this person!!!!
Its me!!!

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just for the contest

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  • movedon
    March 17
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    congrats on the silver trophy. so sad. but very well penned.

    ~gypsy


  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 16

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    Ooh very dark, yet wonderfully penned.
    Great gory descriptions & imagery portrayed here as well..

    Best of luck & thanks for entering


  • Nymphetemine
    March 10
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    Very deep and painful... Thank you...