not sure where I am
I look around to all white
people look at me
smile and touch me with
huge hugs and I cringe
my cocoon looks good
that I just birthed from
I want to go back
just for a while
I close my eyes
they call to me, "Michael"
who is this person?
I look at them again
they look in my eyes
I feel like a specimen
is that what I am?
a woman with tears says
come back to me
I wonder where I've been
she looks at the man in white
we have to be patient he says
just give him time to adjust
quiet a fall in the deep dark hole
he stayed there so long
I wish I could go back
Author notes
Amnesia would be a scary thing.
Michael
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Comments
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True i would hate to have Amnesia Great write
Thank you for entering
Good Luck
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Yikes, amnesia is one of my worst fears
Great write, deep emotion here.
Bravo!!!
♥ Kate -
this is deep. your words pulls you in and you have to read to the end because you are captivated by the intensity of the words. you are quite the poet.
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Wow, I loved this. You did a fantastic job on this. Thank you for entering this wonderful masterpiece into my contest. God bless you always in all you do and write and best of luck in the contest.
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