With one loud bang
Another light of love is gone
With weapons baszing
Why people reply this tragedy
This season of spring
This season of new life
People, young or old
Should never die a vicious death
How did they measure the meaning
Each life they took meant
By the number of bulets it took to kill them
Or the reactions of others that witnessed their death's?
With one last shot
The massicure is over
But the bloody tragety will live on
In the meamory of those who servived.
Author notes
my name is apoetforplsouth. My poem is a mixture of the song seasons of love and Why?. am a glad that this is here to remember the ones who were killed and not the two who caused it. thank you for the chance to write about this.
I will come back and rework it after a few days so that It makes more sence.
A contest entry
- Columbine Tribute Contest (Closes on 4/20/09) -- Lots of Options!!! --- Open to Prewrites by ZachP.
13800 points, ended May 24, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
typos if any
Comments
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This is really good, I'm not sure anything needs to be changed! You are an incredible writer and I look forward to reading more in the future! Good luck in the contest!
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