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"Lollipop Kisses"

Sticky sweet with kisses
Lollipop that the mouth misses
Syrupy hands covered in goo
Anxious to hold on to you
Afraid to let go of mother dear
As this lap holds comfort here

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  • I love lollipops too! I always find that even if you avoid touching the stick for too long your hands still get really sticky and gooey! Great write, i loved it as much as i related to it! x

  • so cute and sweet. wish you luck in the contest.


  • PureRomance
    March 8

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    This is cute and very sweet. You did an excellent job with this. Thank you for entering it into the contest. It amazes me all the wonderful poetry I get to read by being a member of this site. God bless you always in everything you do and write and best of luck to you in the contest. Keep up the excellent work and when I'm finished with judging my contests I plan on coming back and reading more of you.