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Early Evening (Adult)

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ah yes the evening has just begun
and we like errant children will
play until the morning breaks

as my passion rises
I want to taste all of you
and so I begin
a long stroll down you body

to kiss the top of your head,
your eyes, you lips, your throat
straddling you now
my tongue traces kisses down your chest

as my tongue teases your nipples erect
I move slowly down your body
each chakra point, given serious attention
until your root chakra rises to meet my hungry mouth

still straddling you I turn my body
s my hips roll back, until your searching tongue
finds my treasure erect. wet and pulsing
my hands and tongue hungry swallow you whole

catching us each
just prior to sweet release
we roll off from each others caress
laughing softly, I burrow deeper into your arms and
 we begin again

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  • Eric Marsh
    October 5
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    lol now this i can really dig...mmmm..time for a cold shower methinks lol..nice one...hope you are feeling better..take care


    • Draig aine gold member
      October 5
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      LOL forsure

      was quite drunk when this was written, thought I hit draft and I hit submit
      and thenot was to late, it was fun, and gives much to think about

  • luv2dream gold member
    September 10

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    "as my passion rises
    I want to taste all of you
    and so I begin
    a long stroll down you body" ...loved this. it's all beautiful!


    • Draig aine gold member
      September 10
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      this was a journal entry that had not intended to post, but I am glad you enjoyed. I enjoyed writing it

  • Beautiful, this is just and exquisite poem.
    I loved it, true beauty through and through.
    Favorite lines
    "as my tongue teases your nipples erect
    I move slowly down your body
    each chakra point, given serious attention
    until your root chakra rises to meet my hungry mouth"

    Beautiful
    ~Serenity

  • Bravo!

    i am def in love with your works right now. could it be you imagination or real experience I wonder.

  • lonleyboy7
    May 13
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    this was fantastic.
    i love it!

  • Bob Fox
    April 1

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    My

    I now want my youth back. Lol. Salacious indeed. The splendor and glory of wonderful sex. & then again & again.


    • Draig aine gold member
      April 2
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      and that is the entire poiny

      so to speak, the again and again and again..........................................


  • Reanna Eryn
    March 24
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    Intresting. I love this. Beautiful!

  • I really like this, I think the last stanza could of been left out it makes it kind of awkward, a good poem no the less.
    thanks for entering it.

  • ea silver member
    March 9

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    oh, for that long stroll... love that second stanza especially, and the shunga! and that burrowing in deeper... nice work - very affecting.

  • zashin
    March 8
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    Very nice. My mind had me seeing the whole scene.


  • Swtpoetryman
    March 8

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    SWEET AND SENSUAL to say the least!

    A sweet, romantic, sensual, heartfelt, emotional, and soulful piece of a wonderful and erotic night of love sweet love and the fruition of it's fire and desire. I'm DELIGHTED that I stopped by to take a look at this today and peep through your window to watch you making love. GOOD LUCK in this contest and the illustration fits the poem to a T and vice versa. I believe that you have fulfilled all 4 elements of the contest title with this erotic piece that had my 'root chakra rising' to use your own words.
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


    • Draig aine gold member
      March 8
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      my humble thanks

      your comment and your help is very much appreicated, I think I must have been carried away

  • Bruce silver member
    March 8
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    Magisterial! Wonderful imagery! The annoying critic notes: 5th stanza - ad for and

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