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Horatio - Shadow of Benet

 

 

 

 

 

When Nelson sailed across the seas,
the war was raging still,
and though he fell his England stood,
the navy learned his skill.

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  • chiefmac
    March 8

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    This is short but the power stands. The S alliteration strengthens the poem. It weakens a little in line three...maybe he fell at Cape Trafalgar, yet England stood,


  • maralisa silver member
    March 8
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    a great write hun thank you for sharingmaralisa